rebel007,
this sounds very good the way it is so far ….
you left a lot of space in the arrangment which I happen to think is good .
since I'm listening to an actual song thats telling a story . i get to hear the power of the song naked w out a bunch of musical kitchen sinks that got throw in there
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yeah , I heard a little bit of Moody Blues probably due to the minor chords …me personaly I thought I heard more of the band America type of sound ….could be the vocals …the way I heard the phrasing and some of the melodies .
a little bit of $u$piciou$ activity in the bass in a couple of the lines ….noticed a few near misses in the timing where a couple of the chord changes land ..
overall, this sounded very good , the performances were natural and relaxed …
I think I'm gonna keep an ear out for this tune to hear how it evolves
Kenny