Hi Lynn, so glad to have heard from you!!! I enjoyed lunch a few months back! I really did!

pushing and pulling could be something kinda cool...the 2nd tune didnt do anything for me. I guess everyone has a different mechanize for writing...but in my odd world if i am writing and re writing and re re writing.......I'm tossing the concept....the things that work best for me at the tunes that flop out and dont require forcing. Again, I know that's not every-bodies gig....but its like a girl...if your working too hard to catch her...she prolly not worth the chase....

Will keep my furry ears out for the finished version.  Thanks for getting it to me Joshua.

Hey Joshua, 
Really good ideas.  I think on version 2, there are too many segments.  
I like the verse and bridge/chorus but the last segment that seems to be the chorus feels a little weeker than the others.  Maybe it is the higher pitch of the melody but I was really with you until that hook.  
I would also consider using the the words "I think" instead of "maybe" like in "I think we've gone too far..."
Good job and good ideas all around.
 
Rimshot