2016/05/08 18:01:30
craigb
Pragi
A summer river being crossed
how pleasing
with sandals in my hands!
 
A haiku by Yosa Buson - 1758

 
Shouldn't that be...
 
A summer river
being crossed how pleasing with
sandals in my hands!
 
?
 
Opportunity
Must be taken when first seen
It only knocks once
 
2016/05/08 18:38:00
Leadfoot
Oooh haiku! I wanna do one!

I have pooped my pants
Wherever shall I find a
Pair of underwear.
2016/05/08 18:44:28
eph221
Leadfoot
Oooh haiku! I wanna do one!

I have pooped my pants
Wherever shall I find a
Pair of underwear.

that's more like it.  We operate on the level of an adolescent don't we leadfoot.
2016/05/08 18:45:44
eph221
craigb
Pragi
A summer river being crossed
how pleasing
with sandals in my hands!
 
A haiku by Yosa Buson - 1758

 
Shouldn't that be...
 
A summer river
being crossed how pleasing with
sandals in my hands!
 
?
 
Opportunity
Must be taken when first seen
It only knocks once
 


Opportunity like death happens many many times over the course of a lifetime.  We die a thousand deaths every day.
2016/05/08 18:59:20
craigb
eph221
craigb
Pragi
A summer river being crossed
how pleasing
with sandals in my hands!
 
A haiku by Yosa Buson - 1758

 
Shouldn't that be...
 
A summer river
being crossed how pleasing with
sandals in my hands!
 
?
 
Opportunity
Must be taken when first seen
It only knocks once
 


Opportunity like death happens many many times over the course of a lifetime.  We die a thousand deaths every day.



Perhaps, but your Haiku is like child with plastic hammer! 
 
They don't understand
So I talk to myself now
What am I saying?
 
2016/05/08 20:57:01
eph221
I always liked my drummers to act like  bam-bam.  He who has the gold rules:  that'd be teenagers.  BTW is there an area of PDX that has more single people.  I live in the SW and it's way too *family values* for my tastes.
2016/05/08 21:23:02
craigb
eph221
I always liked my drummers to act like  bam-bam.  He who has the gold rules:  that'd be teenagers.  BTW is there an area of PDX that has more single people.  I live in the SW and it's way too *family values* for my tastes.




The humorous answer would be that you should move from Beaverton to Wood Village. 
 
A more helpful answer would be to move somewhere nearer the Pearl District or Hawthorne District.
2016/05/09 00:35:54
sharke

2016/05/09 02:25:42
Pragi
craigb
Pragi
A summer river being crossed
how pleasing
with sandals in my hands!
 
A haiku by Yosa Buson - 1758

 
Shouldn't that be...
 
A summer river
being crossed how pleasing with
sandals in my hands!
 
?
 

Yes,afaik  the classical haiku is written
the way you mentiomed.
Bur read yourself about the haiku´s of Yosa Buson:
 
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Yosa_Buson
2016/05/12 23:34:08
eph221
Yes but did lao tzu play an alembic?
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