Very cool Lynn - love the vocal effect - gives it some nice edge.
My only slight production preference would be to slightly narrow the image - the extreme panning started to confuse my ears a bit. I also really like the middle 8. Nice one mate.

Really enjoyed this track and all the sounds that came in and out. Listening through cans, I hear that the left and right synth vs gt isn't quite balanced, The synth is winning the loudness battle. I do like the fx on the vox, works very well with this song.
 As mentioned by other the drums need a bit of care, for me the snare doesn't snap enough.
Thanks for sharing.

This is a cool, quirky song Lynn, very creative arrangement. Ditto to all the drum comments, and the guitar in my right ear could use some beef to balance that synth on the left.
 
LOVE that bassline, really grabs you from the off.
 

doncolga
Reminds me of early Genesis. 

This comment made me scratch my head..wha? Song reminded me of some '80's stuff actually, Wang Chung, Blancmange, Reluctant Stereotypes.

is that a vocoder effect ? it sounds good. good mix on it

Daryl, thanks for your comments.  I narrowed the left and right channels a bit and balanced them better.  Good ears.
 
Gus, thank you for taking the time.  I took your suggestion and adjusted the synth and guitar.  I think it helps.
 
James, I gave the drums a bit more volume and low end, and it drives the song better, I think.  Thank you.
 
Tony, the vocal f/x is Izotope's Nectar, the 64bit, VST3 version that came with Sound Forge 11.  Gracias for your listen.
 
Thanks to all the great ears and suggestions I'm getting, this production is getting where it needs to be.