I'm listening though H-phones and the flow of the new mix is much, much better now.....Well Done!!
If I had to nitpick anything, I'd like to hear the bass to be a bit more clear (on the phones it seems slightly muddy.....it may very well be my H-phone though). Also, the drums could be slightly louder (possibly 1-2 dB louder (especially during the "chorus" parts)).
Pluto, you do have an excellent piece of music/playing here and I'd like to here more stuff from you. Great job!!!