Hi, Terry. You and your partner are getting along very well, music wise. I like the direction you've gone in, lately, and this song is my favorite one so far. The first version seems more in-your-face than the second, especially with the vocals. Your voice is strong in this, which compliments the terrific guitar playing. What I'm missing in both versions is more of your fine piano playing. It's there, but I have to strain to hear it. Overall, there is a diamond in the rough here, and a few minor tweaks should bring it out.