This is probably the most epic song i've written but... i'm pretty concerned about the mix, I've over listened to it i think and lost all objectivity lol. I was really hoping for a bit of critique/advice about the mixing so if anyone could offer some that would be great! I know its a long song, so i'd also value any thoughts about the song structure. The 5 min synth solos at the end will stay though haha :)
 
http://www.reverbnation.com/MRKuk/song/21592977-transforma
 
Thanks
 
Matt
 

To be honest, the first half wasn't holding my attention so I fast-forwarded through.   I definitely found the second half more musically interesting. 
 
Mix-wise I think it's a little flat, though I can't tell if that's partly due to the upload format compression (sort of sounds that way).   I think if the main "riff" could have more separation in its component synths that might help give it a little more depth, and perhaps more variation with the snare (velocity, accents, etc).