Hear is something I did with my friend Chris he wrote the lyrics the rest is down to me.
 
This link is to the song on his reverbnation page Con Passion 
 
No offensive lyrics but there is definitely some double entendre in his words.
 
The Remix version is here Con Passion Remix top tune in the list.

Drums seem a bit lost. On purpose?

bapu
Drums seem a bit lost. On purpose?

Thanks for listen Ed, I suppose I have mixed them a little into the background.  Is it the whole kit you find reduced or specific bits.  I would be interested in your thoughts.

Seems like the whole kit to me. 

Thanks Ed I will revisit the whole mix again.  I know it sounds like an excuse but I will admit I did rush this so I will sort my ears out and give it another going over.  Thank you I do value your input.

Clever lyrics.  I like this song but gently suggest that you relook at some of the parts ( the rhythm guitar seems a little out of sync at some points) and the vocals and guitar could be brought forward in the mix - likely by just taking off some of the reverb.  I also agree with Bapu that drum level is low.  I also think the mix could be widened a little.
 
Picky stuff though, because the main thing is that you've written a cool tune!    

Thanks Eric glad you think it is a cool song my friend whom sings and writes the lyrics will be happy.
 
Given some time and a fresh set of furry ears I will give the mix another look.
 
Thanks again for taking the time to listen and comment.

Catchy tune.  I was a bit lax on listening to the lyrics.  Caught some that were cool.  My first listen on all songs seems to go to instruments.  I'll give another listen here soon.  Different from what I was expecting from the furry one!  I liked it and I liked it the more I heard.

Another interesting piece Wook. I must agree the drums do seem tiny. :)

Thanks Warren please to see you drop in and spend some time with my efforts.
 
Hi Gus yes I agree the drums are small so I am in the process of revisiting to see what I can do with them there drums.  Thanks for the listen and the comment.