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  • Super Saver - A supermarket song!
2014/07/16 05:10:34
whack
Hi All,
 
Good to be back on here. Hope you are all well.
 
Came up with a track with two fellow mates when in New Zealand and it was written around the supermarket "new world" whom have their "super saver" discounts on everyday.It was a lot of fun.
 
Attached is the track. Can you take a listen and provide some feedback particularly on mix, impact and arrangement.
 
https://soundcloud.com/ci...rn/super-saver/s-5f9Dj
 
Thanks,
 
Cian
2014/07/19 03:44:13
whack
No one out there to land a pair of ears on this? even to say its ****! wanna do a fun video for it next week.
 
Cian
2014/07/19 10:36:47
Rimshot
I like it.  Mix is great but there not enough low end (bass mids are heard but not the low end).  Kick is way too soft. 
The mids and highs are really good.  I like the high energy and fun song.  
2014/07/19 12:28:13
bapu
Whack's Back.
2014/07/19 12:36:48
Freddy J
I really like this song.  It is fun, energetic, and maybe just a wee bit of sarcastic?  It almost has a bit of orchestrated skiffle to it.  The vocals are great and I like the lead-up to the ending.
Nice one!
2014/07/19 17:05:04
drma173
great song, man you have a great voice you sometimes remind me of Micheal Jackson voice. I like some of the tracks on your SC.
2014/07/20 18:45:57
chasmcg
I thought this sounded great. Lots of reverb during the bridge caught my attention and had doubts about that. Other than that, great. 
2014/07/20 21:17:02
markno999
Cian,
 
Your vocals sound really good as always, very professional.    The song is pretty good, I actually think the verses are a little stronger than the chorus  (could be my aversion to supermarkets though:))   The bridge is really cool.   Sounds good.
 
Regards 
2014/07/22 06:53:41
whack
Thanks everybody for your comments,Ive taken a few pointers from them all.
 
If anyone else can second any of the above comments or can add anything before I do a final re-tweak, greatly appreciated.
 
Cian
 
 
2014/07/23 17:37:53
stevec
That was fun.       Overall I really like the mix - clear and with nice separation.   But I do agree with Rimshot that the kick seems a bit light.    Minor point in the overall scheme of things.
 
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