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2014/07/20 09:05:19
illerill
Rimshot
I like version 2.  I don't understand why you say you have no confidence in your vocals.  They sound fine to me!  
Just believe in what you are singing.  Version one has segments that don't sound believable at all.  
 




Thank you Rimshot. Well sometimes I do have confidence, but then there are times like these when everyone is saying Test 2 is better than Test 1 which I cannot agree with which makes me question myself.
 
Also I just want to double check with you that you are clear on that it's just the first part "I don't understand it had to go this way" that is different on the two versions.
 
I also noticed Test 2 is the one that is on top in the playlist so just want to make sure Test 2 is the "version 2" you are referring to.
2014/07/20 09:06:41
illerill
gusrogers
Right after listening to both 15x or so I can say that version 2 is much better. :)




By versions 2 you mean the one named Test 2, right?

Thanks for listening.
2014/07/20 09:33:01
Rimshot
Version 2 is better on the first verse than version 1.
2014/07/20 09:49:15
illerill
Is it the way it's sung it's better or is it the right notes on test 2 and the wrong notes on test 1?
 
I'm gonna singing this some more tomorrow. I need to feel that it's right aswell :)
Really appreciate the feedback.
2014/07/20 10:12:55
RussjWhite
illerill
Rimshot
I like version 2.  I don't understand why you say you have no confidence in your vocals.  They sound fine to me!  
Just believe in what you are singing.  Version one has segments that don't sound believable at all.  
 




Thank you Rimshot. Well sometimes I do have confidence, but then there are times like these when everyone is saying Test 2 is better than Test 1 which I cannot agree with which makes me question myself.
 
Also I just want to double check with you that you are clear on that it's just the first part "I don't understand it had to go this way" that is different on the two versions.
 
I also noticed Test 2 is the one that is on top in the playlist so just want to make sure Test 2 is the "version 2" you are referring to.


Yes, Test 2. Don't question yourself in regards to your singing. It's down to what take works best. I like test 1, but  I feel that test 2 is the one that works best. We all have our differing views on it. 
2014/07/20 10:17:40
Rimshot
illerill
Is it the way it's sung it's better or is it the right notes on test 2 and the wrong notes on test 1?
 
I'm gonna singing this some more tomorrow. I need to feel that it's right aswell :)
Really appreciate the feedback.




Your delivery on version 1 in some spots just doesn't sound like you were into it.  There are pitch and timing issues.  In those spots, it sounds like a rough vocal and not a finished track.  That is why I like version 2 better - it sounds like it is overall a good take.  
 
Like others have said, don't 2nd guess as much.  Try to listen objectively.  Does it feel good?  Is it in time?  Is it on pitch?  Do you believe what you are singing?  Does it work with the track?  
Follow your instincts. 
2014/07/20 14:01:08
illerill
Rimshot
illerill
Is it the way it's sung it's better or is it the right notes on test 2 and the wrong notes on test 1?
 
I'm gonna singing this some more tomorrow. I need to feel that it's right aswell :)
Really appreciate the feedback.




Your delivery on version 1 in some spots just doesn't sound like you were into it.  There are pitch and timing issues.  In those spots, it sounds like a rough vocal and not a finished track.  That is why I like version 2 better - it sounds like it is overall a good take.  
 
Like others have said, don't 2nd guess as much.  Try to listen objectively.  Does it feel good?  Is it in time?  Is it on pitch?  Do you believe what you are singing?  Does it work with the track?  
Follow your instincts. 




The thing is apart from 00:06 to 00:09 test 1 and test 2 are identical. They are exactly the same. So when you say my delivery on version 1 in some spots just doesn't sound like I was into it and also has pitch and timing issues I'm getting a bit confused because I feel like you are commenting more than on the 3 seconds thats are actually the only thing that is different between the two.
2014/07/20 17:25:43
RussjWhite
Jimmy is just giving you some general things to think about when you listen back to what you have sung.
From the short snip that you have given I can hear that test 2 fits better. 
2014/07/20 21:35:10
Rimshot
Thanks gusrogers, spot on.
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