Cool song, Star. I really like how the vocals sound on this... I'm with steve on that a bit mellower, less characteristic piano sound would be ideal. The synths sound really awesome as well. Nice one!

I like the song and your vocal and arrangement.  
Too much compression on the lead voc.  Piano is a bit hot but not too much.  
I think there is too much stereo compression on the master outputs.  
You have a nice voice so maybe not hit is so hard with the compressor and let yourself breath more.
What I like most is the creativeness of this piece.  Good job.

Sorry I have been away guys...thanks for listening!!
 
I removed the bass and drums on this mix and replaced them. It seemed decent in my studio monitors, but after I uploaded it I listened in my cans and I'm thinking the bass is either too much or too busy...Opinions here are much appreciated. The mix was also changed in a few other places, specifically I added some choir voices tuned to a strange harmonic and mixed the tracks a bit more.
 
Rebel- Thanks for listening! I appreciate your comments. I will look into those piano sounds and try to get a better balance.
Rikki- Thank you! 
 
John- Thanks for listening! Yes a few more adjustments and hopefully this will be ready.
 
Mike- Thanks for listening. I made great use of Melodyne ARA!
 
Wookie- Many thanks for listening and commenting!
 
Beagle- Thanks for listening! Hopefully this is a bit closer now.
 
Herb- Thanks! You always have great suggestions! Thanks!
 
Dan- Thanks for listening. I  have this one on my list of things to change. Thanks you for the kind comments.
 
SteveC- Hmmm a darker tone...something I hadn't thought about, and more variation.  Thanks for the suggs.
 
Davedud- Thanks for listening. I will see what other sounds I have.
 
Rimshot- Than you for taking the time to listen to this. I'm hearing that less is more and I'll makecompressor adjustments.
 
Hopefully I can address these suggestions and get a new mix up soon. Take care guys!