Great job!
I like the energy of the guitar playing and all the parts you thought through and played. I liked the vocals and the rhythmic accents you were hitting with the lyrics.
The song seemed more hard rocking than metal, by that I mean it seemed to have more melodic movement and I think I liked that aspect a whole lot. It kept my ear waiting to find out what was next.
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T.M.I.: It's a good idea to leave a space after your description before you select the description so that you can continue adding text with having the link extend over it. That will make sense later after you try this a few times.