Yeah... headed in the right direction.
Going to listen on cans......
OK... the cans let me get inside the song better. I'm hearing the drums as a few db too loud and they sound compressed a bit too much for country. Ease off the comp and back the volume levels off a bit.
The guitar in the beginning is setting too far back in the mix and doesn't have enough presence on it's tone. On the computer it sounded like a muddy something being played. Cans let me hear what it was. Mix for the lowest common denominator. That way it sounds impressive on a better system.
Minor nits that need fixing but headed in the right direction. It kinda has a Jackson Browne feel to it in many ways.... I really loved his Running on Empty project and Lindley was on that with him.