Get rid of the very first vocals so the music brings in the second vocals, which are awesome and the rest of the song sounds great. Love how the synth comes in and the rest of the songs moves along pretty nicely. The vocal harmonies sound pretty good actually and the mix is nice and clear. Nice song!!
 
Peace and Blessings, John

Great start. Very clear open piece.  not sure what I can say for support though. Just being part of the gang and checking out all of your current endeavours.
 
 
 
 
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Sounds great to me. Thought the vocals were a little low at the beginning but not the case at all as the song progresses. Enjoyed the listen. 

Sounds like something to develop, it is very close.
 
Thanks for sharing.

AT- Thanks for listening. I uploaded a new mix which almost sounds like another song. The rework was involved. Good suggestion on the Melodyne..I made use of it in this new mix. Appreciate the suggestions!
 
John- I followed the vocal suggestions and they have been re worked. Thanks for listening!
 
Gus- Thanks and I'll go to that link.
 
Chas- Thank you sir!
 
Wookie- Thanks for listening. I think I have it pretty close now.
 
https://soundcloud.com/starise/the-outer-limits

I agree with the others: this is a great start and now that you've got the song (except maybe some wording), you can really focus on the production. Looking forward to hearing the next version of this.
 
The comment about the drums is true, but can be easily fixed with some variation in the drum pattern and judicious nudging.
 
Regards,
Dan
 

Hi Tim, I like it so far. Good job.
 
Rik

Dan -Thanks for listening! yes still some more to do yet.
 
Rik- Thanks for listening! 
 
I listened again and decided I need to work more on the vocal harmonies...especially those high ones...
 
 

Harmonies changed. Do you think they are the right volume ?

For me, the harmonies definitely sound better - much tighter and better balanced.
 
Though I'm still listening for some higher falsetto lines in the choruses...