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Like the song. You sing it well. Think the drums could use a little work as far as EQ and sitting in the mix..

I tried to send you a PM but you don't accept PM's apparently. Something I wanted to run by you....

Just to echo everything above - nice job on the vocals (love the high notes towards the end) and the guitar.  The chorus on the guitar parts didn't both me much, but it's probably worth trying them clean to see if you like it better.   And even though I'm listening on cheap PC headphones I actually could pick out the Dim Pro bass line no problem - that makes me wonder if those with better playback systems are hearing low end conflicts that these headphones simply can't reproduce.
 
For the drums, I've used Session Drummer in the past and it definitely can sound much more "life like".   Are you using any effects with SD?  If so I'd try turning all them off just to see how it blends with the rest of the tracks then adjust if something needs adjusting.   And definitely don't over-compress them - I think the song needs to breathe. 
 

chasmcg - Thanks for listening to the song and for the compliment. I'm going to re-do the drums I think. 
 
Guitarhacker - I just edited my profile to allow for PMs. 
 
stevec - Thanks for the compliments. It seemed like I could hear the bass as well, but then I don't have fancy monitors. I'm sure I EQ'd the heck out of the bottom end. If I am using any effects on the drums, it's minimal--I think there some compression and EQ. I've been loading different drums into the program. Maybe I just haven't found the right drum sample yet. I was looking for something on the softer side without being too soft. 
 
 
 
 

Another accidental duplicate post... Sorry, I guess I'm not patient enough and I keep hitting the button.