OK... thought I'd chime in a say a few things. Tim approached me with the song almost written. I helped smooth out a few lines in the lyrics but not enough to really say I co-wrote this with Tim... it's Tim's song through and through.
I jumped in and worked up a few guitar tracks, to try to determine a direction, scrapped them did some new ones, and put the steel and B3 together. Tim worked on guitars and sang it. I think I literally threw a few harmony tracks together for Tim more as a "we could do this" sort of thing. We went back and forth over the direction, should it be rock, or country and what direction? I was hearing a Waylon sort of 4 on the floor country outlaw thing. Tim was more of a rock persuasion. Since it was his song, hey... whatever he wanted to do is fine with me....
I think we did the drums several times. I kinda like the AD track.... I think it was the second or third one Tim came up with. Bass was even worse. Tim offered a bass track, I countered, Tim did another bass track, I countered with a bass I played on the keys but it sounded to.... boring. Time did yet another and I countered yet again with a track I thought really had a sweet groove. But hey, it's Tim's song, and while I was working up my own 2 versions of the song...... I didn't really want to do the mixing and production on this, I wanted to see what Tim would end up doing.
There was a week there we lost touch with each other.... he was waiting on me and I was waiting on him.... So, this is the version Tim decided to go with. Nowhere in the run up to the final version did we have a piano in the earlier versions. That is new to this version, and it's Tim on the keys.
My comments on this mix: Vocals and harmonies are sounding good.
I don't like the tele. It just doesn't sound like I would like it to. But that's not an issue related to the production. I'm seriously considering selling it and buying a Gibson or something else similar. The lick was "borrowed" from little MJ.
The drums are still an issue IMHO. The beat at the beginning almost has a swing to it.... having that swing feel and at other times not so much, it really leaves the groove of the song in a kind of limbo, in that, it never establishes itself rhythmically into a definable groove. The drums also are a bit low. As such, I don't think there is a firm groove yet in the song. It feels kinda loose. To me, this is the biggest issue with the song.
I don't know that I would have used the steel in this version. And I'd probably limit the tele a bit and perhaps back it off a few db.
All in all, headed in the right direction but still some work (IMHO) left to do.
NOTE: We've probably spent more time on this song than almost any other collaborative effort I've worked on. Not a bad thing... just trying to find that sweet spot for this song to live in.