I really like that percussive string instrument in the beginning, either a harp or a dulcimer. Then the transition there @ 1:15, very creative. One thing I would change, those accents that come in starting @ 1:40? with the drums and bass? Man, I would kick that in the arse... It should PUNCH through the mix, which it currently does not, it's kind of flat currently (in the background) and the drums in general which come in afterwards, really need more punch. 

Hi Robbie, It's actually a guitar. Weird, through my cans the drums sounded really large. I'll have a look out for some punch for you.
Also, please vote for my tune! I wanna win.

Best regards,
Gus

Voted ! I am not sure if it took ,the number didn't update.

Thanks bud. Doesn't look like it. Still at 24! I wonder if you need to be signed into facebook?

I was! (signed in to FB) I will try again
 
 
Tried again,apparently it isn't taking, sorry, I will see if I can figure out why.
 

OK, listening again tonight on a different set of cans. It would be lovely to have a different set of cans every night...
 
nope, same problem. It's like the drums and bass are muted. I hope it's not a problem with my sound card, I can't afford to replace it just now. 
 
And I would vote? But I don't do FB.

teego
I was! (signed in to FB) I will try again
 
 
Tried again,apparently it isn't taking, sorry, I will see if I can figure out why.
 

Thanks for trying. Perhaps go though this path; https://facebook.wizehive.com/voting/ghostwriter and search for Dreams & Nightmares.
 Cheers again. Please share this with everyone you know. I want this piece of music as EastWest's demo for Ghostwriter!

The Band19
OK, listening again tonight on a different set of cans. It would be lovely to have a different set of cans every night...
 
nope, same problem. It's like the drums and bass are muted. I hope it's not a problem with my sound card, I can't afford to replace it just now. 
 
And I would vote? But I don't do FB.

I'm sure it's my side of things Robbie. This is the first time that I've added drums to a mix of mine. I also don't use FB, but need to to get the votes in.

rebel007
Nice. Definitely the stuff of dreams and nightmares, I totally get where you're coming from.

Thanks for listening Wayne. :)