So..................?
The mix, the song, the ..............??
I think the mix needs a little work yet, as to me the cymbals not loud enough sometimes, and the bass too loud and the voice a little loud. Well, just needs a variation of the mix but the song sound fine with all the parts in it including the flute.
Not familiar with the same at all, so that's about it from my point of view, and remember I may be in "space" or lost in it.