This latest version sounds super!  Everything is in it's place and the track sounds like it should be on the radio.  Your warm voice matches the warmth of the mix.  Well done!

Thanks Lynn! I really appreciate your nice comments!
 

I honestly don't remember the original, but this mix sounds great. Snare is about perfect along with the guitars and bass. Kick is a touch thin, for my taste, and the ride cymbal sounds "wrong" somehow. I'd find a brighter ride if you can, and push it back a bit. Vocals are really well done and your voice matches the song perfectly.
 
Regards,
Dan
 

Thanks for listening Dan! The ride cymbal bothered me in this too but I went through pure heck trying to build this drum track. A lot of linking and unlinking of clips that would not link or unlink, doubled notes through out , a lot of editing in event view. I will try a brighter ride and see what it does. Thanks for the advice!