Hello all. Been a while. Here's a little ditty:
 
 
http://90dbband.bandcamp.com/track/gabrielle
 
 
 
Regards,
 
Bob

Really nice, Bob.  I like the way the piano is spread across the channels.  The reverb on the vocal is a nice touch, but I would like to hear the vocal a db or two louder so that it sounds present with the piano a bit more.  The accordian and strings are just at the right volume to enhance the mood.  Good songwriting.

Nice job.   The music and arrangement reflect the lyrics well.   I like the accordion - nice touch.   Along with the vocal melody and chord changes it reminds me a little of C'est La Vie by ELP - totally different genres, I know.  
 

Nice tune and good performance! Gabrielle is a good singable name to  write a song around too. Enjoyed it!
 

Very well done. Piano and vocal present an intimate space, then the other instruments come in and out, like spectators. Beautiful song as well...
 
Regards,
Dan

Lynn,
 
Thanks for the kind words. I agree about the vocal being a bit low, but some say that causes the listener to turn up the volume, letting Msrs. Fletcher and Munson take over.
 
 
stevec,
 
Thanks for listening and the kind remarks.
 
 
teego,
 
Thanks a lot.
 
 
Dan,
 
Thanks for listening and the nice words.
 
 
Regards,
 
Bob
 
 
 

Mix comes across well here, well written and performed.  Thanks for sharing. 

Very nice melody and lyric.  I hear the piano dry and the lead vocal a bit wet.  I would suggest they both match in ambiance which might even make it more intimate like we captured your performance in a room somewhere.
 

Wookiee
Mix comes across well here, well written and performed.  Thanks for sharing. 

 
 
 
Wookiee,,
 
Thanks for listening and the kind remarks. I hope you don't discorporate before we have a chance to share water.
 
Regards,
 
Bob

Rimshot
Very nice melody and lyric.  I hear the piano dry and the lead vocal a bit wet.  I would suggest they both match in ambiance which might even make it more intimate like we captured your performance in a room somewhere.
 

 
 
Rimshot,
 
  You're right. The piano needs a bit of verb. Thanks for listening.
 
 
Regards,
 
Bob