Link with song and lyrics:

www.youtube.com/watch?v=kshTMrpMA_w

Thanks in advance for listening.

Sounds pretty good. You've got some talent there. Mix is pretty good, though it sounds a bit muddy on YouTube.
 
Regards,
Dan

This has a nice, wide stereo image that I like in a mix.  The performance is very well done and is cleverly arranged.  Unlike Dan, the mix sounds clear to me, and I like the way the bass drum pops out of the speakers.  Once you get 25 posts under your belt, you'll be able to post direct links to your music.  Hope to hear more from you.

Lynn
This has a nice, wide stereo image that I like in a mix.  The performance is very well done and is cleverly arranged.  Unlike Dan, the mix sounds clear to me, and I like the way the bass drum pops out of the speakers.  Once you get 25 posts under your belt, you'll be able to post direct links to your music.  Hope to hear more from you.

Hmm, could just be the way some Youtube stuff comes across on Firefox. Not the first time I've had that happen.
 
Regards,
Dan
 

Thanks guys for the feedback!