Thanks for taking the time to have a listen and comment Gus, interestingly others outside of here like the drums different ears I suppose. 

I think the main thing about the drums is that they sounded cheap compared to the rest which is of high quality! 

gusrogers
I think the main thing about the drums is that they sounded cheap compared to the rest which is of high quality! 

Interesting, they are from Arturia VDM 

Excellent production.  The arrangement and sounds are really good.  I like the drums and percussion because it gives dimension to the scene as they are more present.   I would look at moving the lead instruments back a touch after the drums come in and make 'em wet like you do at the end of the piece.  
 
Nice textures and feel.   

John - Nicely done, the synths are outstanding.  All that is missing is the bass;)  Very cool.
 
Regards

I propped myself against something and listened again? It sounded better! 

Wookiee
Thank you Steve for the listen and comment, I guess the delay on the drums is either to subtle or it is getting lost in conversion to MP3 perhaps I should post a wave version via box?
 

I just listened again, and it seems the snare and hihat have a very "rhythm machine" like thinness to them that stands out against the music which IMO is much more lush.    Perhaps a little layering with "rounder" tones and a dark reverb for more depth?

Thanks Jimmy glad you enjoyed my furry rambling.
 
See I told you Robbie
 
Noted Mark, I will see about making a Wave file of this as for you as there is a real Bass rumble drone all through this that just goes phut in MP3