Very nice.   Intimate and well done.   I like when the second guitar comes in about half way through, adds just enough of a change.
 
Although the squeaks are still there, I think the guitar in the new mix is better balanced.  
 

This song fits the mood of my day. It's pouring down rain. This sounds great jamie!

I think its a very nice song. I think it would be better if you double the guitars and tripple the voice and supercompress one track  - it will fall out very well and give a better ground-stand. And add some strings from the middle of the song towards the end. Suddenly you have a hit;-)

I like the simplicity and clean performances.  The string noise is a bit much sometimes but that gives it a live sound.  Not a lot to say except I like it and you have a nice tune.

Hello Jamie, 
OK , I just gave your tune a listen and I think you can do a lot better than this mix .
the  singer sounds real good  why not fatten up your guitar tracks and make them more lush and spread out 
+ 1000 on editing the string noises, the string squeaks are not adding anything constructive to your song  
 
Kenny