Here is a new one that I have been working on.  Well, kind of new.  I had this basic rhythm going since last May when I was stuck in Vegas working for 3 weeks.  Other songs kept popping up, so I kept shoving this one to the back burner.  I finally drug it back out and forced myself to add lyrics to the song.  I have toiled over the lyrics for the last 3-4 weeks.  I find myself toiling over lyrics more and more these days.  I'm sure no one else has that problem.     

Any ways, I think I am almost done with this song.  I have one small spot that has been bothering me, that I may try to retrack and fix.  I am not going to point anything out though, I want to see what others think.  I maybe my own worst critique, so I will wait and see.  Link below:
 
One Way Out:
 
https://soundcloud.com/michaeljhanson/one-way-out
 
or:
 
http://www.reverbnation.com/michaeljhanson/song/20559441-one-way-out
 

I think that you have a good tune here.  I want to listen again and maybe pick up some pointers for you.  However, I think it had more of a Tom Petty vocal feel.  I do remember hearing a crash cymbal throughout that seemed as though it didn't need to be there.  I really liked the vocal when you started rockin' towards the end.  

Cool tune... the ending reminded me of Alice Cooper...... The Ballad of Dwight Frye.... but your guitars have better tone.

Great tune mike. You get better and better with the guitar tones every time.

Mike, your productions just get better and better.  The guitar solo was tasty and fat, and the vocals are quite convincing.  Maybe a little too much cymbal, but not by much.  A slight tweak and you've got yourself a gem.

This is a very good song and arrangement.  Very good vocal, which reminds me a bit of Dylan in his better days.

I must admit? I didn't even listen? But there seems to be some kind of forum virus?

evadianeplug, thanks for the listen!  I'll check on those cymbals and see if I can get them sitting a little better in the mix.
 
Herb, thank you for your comments on guitar tone.  Lord knows I tweak with them enough, hopefully they are sounding good.  Part of it is that I feel my playing is getting better as well.  I took so many years off in the middle of my life, that it has taken a while to kind of find my tone again.  All guitars and the bass are using Amplitube 3 on this song.  Just loving the Ampeg amp tone on the bass lately, it punches through so nicely in my mixes of late.  I have been pulling back on guitar distortion lately, which seems to clean up mixes a little nicer.  It never takes as much distortion as you think in these mixes. 
 
Starise, thanks for the listens as well.  I noticed that you spotted this one even before I posted it here.  I appreciate the support.
 
Hey Lynn, Appreciate it.  I keep striving to get better, hopefully something is clicking.  Lynn, the solo is an Amplitube 3 amp, I don't recall which one off the top of my head.  I don't generally use a lot of pedals, but on this solo, I added a wah, and just set it pretty much in a stationary position that seemed to fit the song.  I'm getting a little better at the subtle techniques in Lead playing as well. 
 
Hey Jude....don't make it bad.   Ha, thanks for the listen bro.  I never quite know how to take Dylan comments, though.  Incidentally, we grew up about 30 miles from one another, though he had quite a few years on me.
 
Robby, bro....you need to get yourself some better antivirus.

I like it all but the sizzle throughout and there seems to be some sibilance on the vocal.

I like the feel. Drums seems a bit muffled to me. Rhythm guitar could use some sheen too.
 
My $0.02 (in 1968 dollars).
 
The chant "one way out of here" seems like it could use some melodyne or a retrack.