You may have gone a bit too far with the stereo processing.  The sound shrinks a LOT when it's summed to mono.  Although there aren't many "true mono" listeners, everyone is a mono listener to some extent.  Just listening to music in the room next door effectively sums the sound to mono.  Beware of falling too much in love with those widening effects.  Just my $0.02.
 
Regards,
J

gusrogers, thanks for listening again and glad you enjoyed the piece. I know what you mean about being on line for so long, sometimes I catch myself in the same situation.
 
Peace and Blessings, John

jsaras, To my ears, I liked the stereo spread on this piece, not to say I would do it on every piece and have not done so. I just wanted this one to stand out a bit different from the others, so thus, the wider spread. 90% of my listening is done with headsets on, mainly because I live in a condo and try to be respectful to my neighbors, something I don't get from mine, but two wrongs don't make a right. Therefore, for me, mono only works when I am playing with live instrumentations and thus don't worry about what others may hear or not hear. I don't sell my music, it is a gift for those that want to listen to it, so it is a free download for listening purposes only and most people listen in stereo. Thank you though for your thoughts and consideration, it is always appreciated and welcomed.
 
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Hi John, this is nice stuff. Thanks for sharing.

Fabulous tune here even if some of the composition sounds reclaimed if you see what I mean, nothing wrong with that. My suggestion is that you might push up the cello in the middle though it didn't came forward as much as it should.

Not online John, spent most of the time mixing. :)
Look forward to learning of your future works.
Gus

Hey Reece, Been awhile since hearing from you. Glad you stopped in for a listen, it is much appreciated. Glad you enjoyed the piece and your welcome!
 
Peace and Blessings, John

Awesome job man.

eko, Thanks for listening and for your comments, they are welcomed and will consider your thoughts. Glad you enjoyed this piece and hope you will come back for other pieces in the future.
 
Peace and Blessings, John

gusrogers, Just a slight misunderstanding, but now the record is straight. I thought you spent all that time on line and was tired, now I know it was spent mixing. Either way, long time for whatever you were doing, and I'd be tired too.
 
Peace and Blessings, John