Rikkie
Hi walt , nice tune and instrumentation, would be nice, imho, if the solo instruments had a bit more space around them so they're  not competing with the choir.
 
Rik

Very valuable insight there Rik, thanks!  I've been trying to put my finger on something clogging the mix and I think you've hit it on the head.  When I drop the "female voices" down a few db it clears things up tremendously.  Thanks, and glad to see you back hanging around here again. :)

very nice Walt - perfect for the genre

Thanks Daryl!

I just uploaded a new mix with a few changes (see 1st post in this thread for details).

Nice rhythm elements, fits your theme really well.  Your forest must have mist in it too, no?
 
Love the harp as well, really provides a nice backdrop for the viola/cello. Overall, well done Walt!
 
Regards,
Dan
 

Thanks Dan.  Yep, there'll be mist, I'm sure. :)
 
I really like the harp too.  It provides some rhythmic structure so I can give the drums a rest from time to time.

Hey Walt, great to hear something new and exciting from you again. I agree, the theme fits very nicely for the forested and elf theme you were trying to capture. The instrumentation and voices all fit together nicely thus far and so I too, think you are on to something here and a great start to boot. I know you will continue to work on this, as you have done in the past with other pieces and it will come off just as you hear it in your minds eye. The mix is nice and clear through my HD headset and so I can't really add any comments that would counter what you have going so far. Just great stuff from a great guy!! Nice work!!
 
Peace and Blessings, John

Not being much of an RPG player, I can only say that the music is very well produced, and I wish you the very best in your endeavours.

Once again nice work. I'm loving the rhythm and the open breeziness to this piece.  

I'm late to the party.  Your work is always so professional.  Did you consider not having any percussion until that 00:22 mark or so, letting the chorus build on its own?  I just thought that might be interesting:)
 
In any case, this will fit perfectly with the game scene you describe.  Another fine composition Walt.