nice dan!
taking a stab at a song like this, is not for the faint of heart.
mix wise, i'd add some high end and crisp up the voice a bit, it's kinda muddy...
in balance the elec guitar (great playing) is a bit too hot in the high end, during the regular verses....
the mix sounds bit flat all the way across....
not much thump, not much midrange clarity, not much high end, except on the reverb tail of the snare (?)
but other than mix thingys, a great version of a killer song.