I took suggestions from you kind folks , conferred with Brian, and this is the mix we agreed on. 
Fixes:
Left side guitar, bass, drums and strings brought up in the mix.
Lead vocal brought down slightly in the mix.
Right side guitar in 2nd and third chorus brought down in the mix.
https://soundcloud.com/stringjammer-1/tell-me-4-20 
 

Sounds great on my system Scotty! Mix is just right IMHO. I can hear each instrument clearly and they are well placed. I love the tone of the kick too. Great job!

Thank you, Bill! 

Good song, loved the harmony parts both vocal and instrumental.  It was a bit hard to get into the vocal to begin but it grew on me.  Nice mix, Scotty.  I'm assuming you are feeling ok?

All sounds well placed Scott. Love the strings and slide, nice how they kinda drift in and out. One thing I would say is that the vox are bit flat in pitch in a few places. If you have melodyne, you can correct. 
On the whole great work.
 
Gus

evadianepug
Good song, loved the harmony parts both vocal and instrumental.  It was a bit hard to get into the vocal to begin but it grew on me.  Nice mix, Scotty.  I'm assuming you are feeling ok?

Thank you, Warren! I am feeling much, much better! 
 
I heard the pitch issues and one or two phrasing issues too. I've been working him to re-take the vocal track but he has been stubborn about it. Perhaps he'll "change his tune" (LOL) after I share your feedback with him.
 
Have a great day, my friend!

gusrogers
All sounds well placed Scott. Love the strings and slide, nice how they kinda drift in and out. Once thing I would say is that the vox are bit flat in pitch in a few places. If you have melodyne, you can correct. 
On the whole great work.
 
Gus

Thank you, Gus!
 
Glad you like my faked slide. What you're hearing are string bends done in three part harmony, on three individual tracks. There are pitch and phrasing issues that I've addressed with Brian. I will have to hammer on him to redo his track.
 
Thanks again and have a great day!

Good overall mix, though the vocals might be a tad bit loud on occasion (intonation aside).  
 
I really like the layers of guitar, something that I don't hear often. 
 

stevec
Good overall mix, though the vocals might be a tad bit loud on occasion (intonation aside).  
 
I really like the layers of guitar, something that I don't hear often. 
 

Thanks Steve! Are there particular spots you can point out where the vox are too loud?

This does sound much better Scotty and the spreads are nice and clear this time. Very nicely done.
 
Peace and Blessings, John