This is the 7th piece on my album and I tried to get the orchestration done pretty decent on this one. So, how do you think it sounds and does it seem to flow right. I know it is hard to understand my work without vocals or a video, but it is what I have written in the short brief, that goes with the piece, that I'm trying to come across with in the music. Let me know your thoughts and comments, they are always appreciated.
 
http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=12681840  "Abiding Grace"
 
Peace and Blessings, John

The samples sounded good John.

Sounds good, I can see this being used in a movie soundtrack somewhere.

Thank you Robbie.
 
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Thanks teego, one day hopefully I'll create a video for this. Thanks for listening and commenting, it is appreciated.
 
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Hey John, 
 
The writing and movement is really good.  I feel your transitions could be re-worked.  Sometimes it seems to not be finished yet.  The choir accents seem dated.  I understand the feeling and style but you are so creative that maybe a different approach would really make this stand out.  I am really looking forward to the video!
 
All the best.

I don't find your work hard to understand at all John, and for me this tune stands well on its own. I get how you like to transition from one feel to another, and although what I see in your music may not be what you see (probably not even close), it is the mark of a good song that I can relate to it in my own way.

Rimshot, Thanks for listening and for your comments, they are always appreciated. I'm working on getting my transitions a little tighter, but sometimes I just can't seem to get them as perfect as I'd like to, but will keep working on it. Thanks for the advice.
 
Peace and Blessings, John

rebel007, Thanks for listening and for the nice comments, they are very much appreciated. I'm glad you find my pieces interesting and can relate to what I'm trying to accomplish with these pieces.
 
Peace and Blessings, John