Hey Matt!
Solid production work! Drums hit hard and the bass is heavy, raw, and aggressive.
I feel like many of my critiques could be solved by a different compression scheme- a lot of the sounds seem to lack some brilliance, particularly the distorted pad/bass. It's rough and raw, but still sounds a bit flat to me. The snare seems a bit muffled, too. Maybe cut some lowish mids (350 Hz?) from it?
The attention to detail is really evident. Sounds like a ton of work went into the track.
Overall, I'd say the track could use the input of a good mastering engineer if you like how it sounds in the mix- maybe a subtle high shelf boost.
Cheers!
-Vince