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  • My new swing/rock track "So Damn Hot" Crits welcomed. (p.2)
2014/04/08 15:30:24
stevec
Good tune!  
 
Mix sounds good here.   About the only thing that stood out for me, but just a little, is that the mid-highs/highs on the rhythm guitars might be just a bit edgy.    At the same time, it kind of works for the song.  
 
2014/04/08 16:14:29
Walt Collins
This is a great live song I'm sure.  The performances are great, and the writing is, well... hot? :)
 
Only thing I'd suggest is maybe take a look at the cymbals, which sound a bit splashy/overcompressed.
 
Fun one!
2014/04/08 16:19:34
daryl1968
Great stuff Chuck - listening on crappy computer speakers - can't wait to crank this up in my studio tonight
2014/04/09 17:37:22
ChuckC
Lynn - Thanks man!  Among other things, I have learned that loudness perception has a lot to do with a balanced eq,  the high mids seem to be what makes sounds pop & feel exciting & in your face.   Eq's & stereo placement help you get each element standing alone & at the same time, sitting with the other tracks.  Oh, and the Slate FG-X when set up right kicks some serious butt on rock stuff   (Just my opinion though.)
 
Markno999 - Ya know you are the 2nd person to mention adding more vocal melodies in the chorus (back ups) and I had considered it but felt that between the bass, rhythm guitars doing one melody, the vocal doing another, and the lead guitar plinking along in the background I was afraid to add much more for fear it would be too much.?   Thanks for listening.
 
Stevec -  Yeah they are a little bright there but there are a few reasons...  1) to get some more excitement from them.  2) to keep them from clashing with the snare roll frequencies in the verses.  3) I have a rather low voice carrying the dominant frequencies of my voice seem to push in the 600-1k range, lots of lows below (that which I rolled some off), then sibliance, rasp, & harmonic content above it. 
 
Walt - I appreciate it man, I have no idea as I wrote & performed this one as you hear it, I quit my last band a month or so ago & have never played this one with a group no less, out-live.  I bet it would go over well though.   & yeah... the cymbals were bothering me too.
Daryl - Thank you man, I hope it sounded nice on your monitors as well!
2014/04/09 18:14:11
markno999
Chuck,
 
Listening again, I think you have space.    You could have a nice harmony in between your current Chorus just singing "So Hot", either quickly, more drawn out, or both.   For example, at :53 you might want to do a short "so hot", at :56 you could do a longer "Sooo  Hot"   Just a thought, I think you have room for it.   Cool song.

Regards
2014/04/10 13:35:59
michaelhanson
Chuck, great song.  No crits here.  The chorus's have a little bit of a Van Halen feel to me.  I can hear Michael Anthony doing those high back up vocals. 
2014/04/14 11:23:28
ChuckC
Final version is up (posted link in the 1st post of this thread).  Tweaked a few things and added some additional vocal content in the choruses.  Thanks for the feedback!
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