This is nice...You're getting the Hardcastle thing.
First thing you need to do is to not be afraid to make the drums louder...even though this is a mellow tune, as is Inner Changes, the drums on Inner Changes are hot and crisp.
There are a few tricks pertaining to the kick and bass marriage that you might or might not know.
One is to EQ them with their predominant frequencies notched to give them room in the total spectral field.
Try taking 80hz (bass sweet spot) out of the kick drum and 60hz (Kick sweet spot) out of the bass part. Those are their frequency sweet spots and they interfere....taking the bass freq out of the kick and taking the kick freq out of the bass gives you more room to marry them.
Compression also helps make them "seem" louder, and meshes them together.
Also, high end on low parts are something people forget...Those parts can be crisp yet not harsh. The right high freqs can give you good definition and clarity....Ya gotta play with this to get what you want...but isn't that why we do this?...to play with stuff...
Good job though...I played guitar to the track for a little while..Twas fun
Jason216