theguitarplayer
Kenny, I thought this was a pretty cleaver piece for you to attack. One thing for me, right off, is the choir is way to loud and hides the instrumentation that is playing along with it. I would bring that choir down until you can hear everything else going along with the choir clearly and distinctly. Everyone else has covered anything else I would have to say, but keep working on this. It should be really interesting and exciting when you get it finished. Will keep my eye open for newer versions as you go.
Peace and Blessings, John
Hi John ,
thank you for your honesty

I appreciate it ..
yeah , doing this sort of thing is tough ….I'm creating my own sounds as I work this thing ...
there seems to be lots of room for error , but hey thats OK ….that's how I seem to learn ….
yeah , I'm not giving up on this …after a little time to refresh and recharge I'm gonna remix and repost a newer version ..
thanks
Kenny