Hello - I posted a new song / project on my Soundlick page link below. First song on the list. As the title suggests, this is about keeping anyone we've lostc lose to use in mind and heart...
 
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I really like that!!  Your voice works well with the song, and your delivery is very honest.  I thought the arrangement was really well done; it was very clean and supported the lyrics well.  You have a LOT of talent.
 
I wish you the most success with your music.

Great feeling in this song Charles, and your voice brings that feeling through very well. I did think the instruments were ducked a little too much during the vocal. Just a first impression.
I don't know whether the vocals were a little too loud, or whether you intentionally dropped the instruments in volume when you sang. It seemed to me a little too far as they got lost behind your voice.
Like I said, just a first impression. I really do like the song.

Hi Charles, nice tune and production. Vocal seems to be to wide, they are masking the instruments.
 
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Thanks for this feedback - appreciated ! I do agree now that two of you have mentioned it - that I dropped the instrumentation too much behind my vocal...I toyed with that a few times while mixing. I am going to go back to this project and tweak it -
 
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Is this a better mix --- ? I tweaked the mix for a better vocal to instrument ratio --- does this work better? 
 
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Hi Charles, lovely song  ,the mix is a lot better imho, balance is good. I would eq the lows of the vocal a bit, seems to be to much lows in the vocals. Well sung btw, suits the song.
 
Rik

Thanks for another listen ---- I will examine those vocal lows.. this is a good learning curve.  

Excellent musicianship

Really nice. Only listening on laptop, but it comes across very well. I like the almost conversational vocal style, suits the subject matter perfectly.