Rikkie - I feel that all sections of that part sound good EXCEPT the last grouping which got shifted a little and especially the last note (as you suggest) sounds really off...I will fix this and moybe more hopefully soon! THANKS GUYS! - Shawn
 
as an added bonus, here is a shot of Me a few years ago in my studio...this time tho there is no vanity shots of my gear but there is a REALLY BEAUTIFUL GIRL SITTING NEXT TO ME! ENJOY!
 
 

Liking the overall feel of this track - I think you could develop the structure a bit more over the 3 minutes.
 
Which sample is it you used from Sonar Producer - I don't find such guitar samples in mine (though ther eis a lot to go thorugh ;-)) ?