The bass could use a little more punch on the bottom end (maybe 100Hz) and some top end to give it some presence.
 
Drums sound right on.
 
Darren, I know you like your vocals buried so I'll not ask you to raise them
 
I wonder what would happen if you gave the guitars a boost on the top (> 2K)?
 
For reference I'm listening on my Sennheiser HD600s so may they are dull and I just spent an hour mixing.

Starise- gotta say when I read feedback like yours it helps me not want to throw all my guitars and equipment into the canal in the morning 'cause at least someone out there 'gets it' ;) thanks more than you know 
 
Bapu- dude ya know i always look forward to your feedback 'cause ever since i've been posting my dumb songs here you always nail it in terms of dialing in things that need to be addressed. thanks x a million

Bapu- on that note: are you 1) referring to shred-noize guitar solo over the 'Iron-Maiden-esque' descending harmonies, 2) the Joe Perry-ish ghost bends in outro, 3) or main guitar riff entire song is written around -- ? 
 
thanks again - Daren :) 
 
 
https://soundcloud.com/da...lled-erotic-chaos-mix3
 
 

ABeautifulVirus
3) or main guitar riff entire song is written around -- ? 

Dat one

bapu

ABeautifulVirus
3) or main guitar riff entire song is written around -- ? 

Dat one

sweet. thanks man. lots.  I actually took that along with your suggestion about bringing bass up … think it's close now. gracias amigo :)  
 https://soundcloud.com/da...olled-erotic-chaos-mri

Sounds very cool to me. Reminds me of Cooper. The mix sound great on my lap top. I love all the sounds in this!!!
 
Cheers, Terry of SilverBeat
 
 
Find SilverBeat is on SoundCloud

ABeautifulVirus
 
 
https://soundcloud.com/da...ed-erotic-chaos-single

This is the best mix I listen to, is this it? 

Wookiee

ABeautifulVirus
 
 
https://soundcloud.com/da...ontrolled-erotic-chaos

This is the best mix I listen to, is this it? 

thanks Wook-man :) yeah that's it i just swapped the right file now -thanks after so many mixes my ears get fatigued so the help here is invaluable- peace man & thanks again 

Daren, we've talked about the buried vocals for years now.  It's your style and what you like .  I actually understood these better than usual.  Maybe because I was reading the lyrics at the same time.  Might I say that the lyrics are strange!  LOL  You are a rocker of a different color, buddy!

ABeautifulVirus

bapu

ABeautifulVirus
3) or main guitar riff entire song is written around -- ? 

Dat one

sweet. thanks man. lots.  I actually took that along with your suggestion about bringing bass up … think it's close now. gracias amigo :)  
 https://soundcloud.com/da...olled-erotic-chaos-mri

Mucho betterer D.