"two hours and 69 dirty minutes
i will eat your twerk and lick your dirty dishes"
 
Who writes lyrics like that anymore?  That was more than erotic, that was sensual.  I've gotten used to you keeping your vocals low in the mix, but I never get tired of your clever arrangements and fabulous performances.  If only there was a Brian Epstein out there for you (sigh...).  I always appreciate the way you take chances and blow us away.
 
 

Awesome tune Daren! Really enjoyed it.
 
Very busy mix, but I think you kept everything under control. All of the guitars, except the one Bapu mentioned, really seemed to share the same frequencies, so it was a little difficult to hear just how much is going on. They could use a bit more separation, and maybe EQ tweaks just to separate them better.
 
Regards,
Dan

Lynn
"two hours and 69 dirty minutes
i will eat your twerk and lick your dirty dishes"
 
Who writes lyrics like that anymore?  That was more than erotic, that was sensual.  I've gotten used to you keeping your vocals low in the mix, but I never get tired of your clever arrangements and fabulous performances.  If only there was a Brian Epstein out there for you (sigh...).  I always appreciate the way you take chances and blow us away.
 
 

:) Lynn you rock dude!! Ya let me know if you run into Brian Epstein reincarnated (or invent a time machine )and please give him my twitter ;0

feel like I grew up in the wrong era

Sick... in a good way.    
 
The lyrics remind me (a lot) of something a musician buddy from years ago would have written.  Eerie...   Definitely like the song, it's got a different vibe for sure.   Mix-wise it sounds a bit centered in the mids, but I only listened to the link in the OP.    Either way, I was still entertained the whole way.    
 

A nice nod to Alice in Chains.
 
Very nice. I like the tune a lot.

Guitarpima
A nice nod to Alice in Chains.
 
Very nice. I like the tune a lot.

you just made my day!!! :) AIC +1 

Darren, I just read the lyrics and am about to listen to the song...one question though...were the pac-man power pills adderal? :) -Shawn
 
more feedback in a few buddy!

lol @ Shawn ;p - could be. maybe more at an ecstacy & viagra party lol 
i took the graphic from a 19th century opium den of sin photo lol 
 
http://youtu.be/law8n7t_CS8

stevec
Sick... in a good way.    
 
The lyrics remind me (a lot) of something a musician buddy from years ago would have written.  Eerie...   Definitely like the song, it's got a different vibe for sure.   Mix-wise it sounds a bit centered in the mids, but I only listened to the link in the OP.    Either way, I was still entertained the whole way.    
 

hey thanks - i actually agreed about the mix(es) - the final version i panned the rhythm guitars right and dialed them in around the rest- opening up middle for main riff and drums to have more presence and air - think that helped a lot - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=law8n7t_CS8