I really like the amount of space in the tune. It's really open. It reminds me of quiet jams with groups of friends.
I think the composition is nice.
The average volume is right on -13 dB measured with RME DigiCheck. Plenty of room for dynamics which is nice.
It is a bit mantra like with the melodic themes. The note durations get very predictable.
If I had a suggestion it might be to sound a little more lyrical.
The composition as a whole is pretty and I listened. :-)
https://soundcloud.com/russ-white/starlit-night-09-03-14 I'm posting the link for you.