My first song written ever

2014/03/27 02:23:50

dpronk1959

Ok, until I did covers, but this is my own first song written. :)
With the help of Sonar and EZKeys of course..

https://soundcloud.com/dick-pronk/get-in-line?in=dick-pronk/sets/body_and_soul_project

What do u think?

2014/03/28 14:51:39

stevec

Good tune! Sounds like it could be an album track from the early 70s.

Mix-wise, I don't care for the snare - a bit to buzzy for my tastes - and at times things seem a bit too centered. But it still has a good feel overall.

2014/03/28 15:28:08

bayoubill

I like this song. Had my foot tappin! I don't think you need the effect on your vox though. Wow, great for a 20th tune even! Good work

2014/03/28 15:43:21

twisted6s

Nice job, sounds a bit over compressed. But other than that very cool.

2014/03/29 08:31:27

Rikkie

Hé Dick, would love to hear this without the vocal effect, makes it difficult to make out the lyrics. Goed gedaan voor een eerste poging !

Rik

2014/03/29 10:19:36

dpronk1959

Thanx everyone! I'll certainly look into the suggestions you guys made/ I'll post it one again when finished.

2014/03/30 04:56:42

dpronk1959

Oh well, at least I decreased compression and vocal effect and made it a bit more spatial.:) Thanx guys for all your comments.

2014/03/31 23:37:23

M_Glenn_M

I Like it a lot. A fine song well sung. I like the B&D balance with the rest.
I agree tho, the vox is all over the stage which seems disorienting.
Like the singer is madly running back and forth. lol

2014/04/01 02:58:11

dpronk1959

Haha...maybe I was :P
I removed the chorus effect now. Maybe it's better now

2014/04/01 12:05:01

M_Glenn_M

Yes I think so. Great job. I like how the chorus builds.

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