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2014/03/25 23:32:50
cryophonik
Nice song, nice playing, and wow, what a voice your sister has - she certainly does have a Karen Carpenter vibe. I definitely agree with Wookie and some of the others regarding the stereo phaser and panning on the guitar - it's too much and really detracts from the guitar and vocal performances. Regardless, still a very nice track....going back for another listen!
2014/03/26 15:12:58
stevec
+1 to everything above - simply done, to the point, and the vocals feel "right".
 
But yeah...  The auto-panning on the guitar is what I really found most distracting.  I don't think a little chorus would be bad, but with the guitar at relatively static positions L+R and the vocal towards the center.   It's a fairly traditional layout but the song is straightforward, so why not?   
 
 
2014/03/28 12:47:18
jamesday
Hey Gus. Thanks for listening and taking the time to post! Glad you enjoyed it!
2014/03/28 12:52:40
jamesday
Hey jude77. Thanks for your time and the good words. You're sure right about the "helpful and supportive"!
2014/03/28 13:01:35
jamesday
Hey cryophonic. Thanks for giving it a listen! I realize everyone's sure right about the guitar fx. But, since I've been so encouraged regarding the song itself, I think I'm just gonna try a re-do of it all. Again, Thanks!   Jim
2014/03/28 13:10:21
jamesday
Hey stevec. Thanks for listening. Why not indeed! The point is the song and the voice singing it. I understand what you're saying. We'll keep that in mind in the re-do. Thanks Steve!   Jim
2014/03/28 16:13:35
twisted6s
The panning effect on the guitar is a bit challenging but still a sweet song.
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