This is an oldy but a goody
http://www.reverbnation.c...erbnation_fb%3Aunknown

I like. One thing I would say that perhaps a little more feeling in the vocal would just add an edge.
 
All round it is a nice track.  Thanks for sharing.

Nice track, but I thought the bass predominated in the mix a little too loud. Might depend on the loudness curve of listening at a different volume for the entire song. But even turning up louder, I thought the bass guitar part was a little too dominant in the mix.
 
Only have a short time to listen to songs, so have to continue on later in the week.