I listened again? I'm sorry, I hope you can accept being criticized? It's really not good man... It sounds like some jamimng over an ambient backing track. The drums are not with the music, there is basically no music? Music involves "a melody" There should be a chord progression? And the bass and drums should support this. There should be less "or no" sound effects in the background. The lead should either be melodic, or should support the chords in "the song?" But there seems to be no song? Just wind, and rain sounds, and a chord or two with some jaming over the top. It may be good to rip a bong load to? But as far as a song goes? Or guitar playing? I'm sorry, it's not good. And I mean no disrespect, even though you may take it that way. It's really just one of the only honest opinions you'll get.
Listen to my latest post, there's a melody? There are words? The guitar goes "with the melody?" Take notes.
Or I could say?
Trippy, but focused enough to be very listenable (WTF!!??)
I understood the feel you were going for much better after I read what it was written about or based on. (Music is about more than the feel sir...)
Cool. A tad too long getting started for me, but then developed nicely. (translation, I didn't like it)
But trust me when I say "all of that is BS." People will blow smoke, "most people will blow smoke?" Do you want smoke? I can blow smoke? You don't want smoke...
Here, I can blow smoke like these morons...
It hat a certain "je ne sais quoi" which was difficult to describe? It took me back to a summer in Spain where I rode horses through the mountains in the spring? There was a smell of fresh berries and pine cones. The playing reminded me of topless girls on the beaches of Martinique... "etc, etc, blah blah blah..." Read? People who are being nice, "are being nice." But it was Trippy, but focused enough to be very listenable...
Music is typically somewhat "formulaic" for a reason. It involves a 1, a 4, and a 5, and sometimes a 2m. Or some variation thereof? I know of what I speak... I know how it works, I understand the math (which is what it is). There's a formula to all good music, all good leads, all good rhythms... It's math. Relative majors and minors? Triads? 7ths, 9ths, etc... It's math. But this tune is not math.