Hey Shawn Lee. I listened to both this and David's original several times each. Not being familiar with this type of stuff, I had to. I think you improved a great deal what you were given. The only think I can speak to is the way you've created a sense of Relentless Suspense that to me makes the song interesting and keeps one listening. I don't get the point of the percussion in the original. I liked the way you chose to concentrate on the repeating melody. Forgive me, I had no idea this remix stuff could be so interesting. Great job Shawn! Thanks,   Jim