Update- I retracked the vox here, added some background music and bass.
 
Bapu- This was done on my acoustic with mics. Thanks for listening.
 
Wookie- Thank you sir.
 
John- I admit this is a sad song. I wasn't trying to make anyone cry but it might have happened :)
 
James- Thanks for listening. If I think about all of the people who have had to leave my life it chokes me up.

Tim, this is a gem.  It takes me back to the coffehouses of yesterday.  It's always good to hear a good song that is simply arranged and tastefully performed.

Love the genuine emotion in this song, the heartfelt vocals and the guitar work.  Nicely done.

Ah, well, perhaps you need more compression on the vocal and guitar to make it a little more smooth.
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Nice song though.

I've been in an acoustic mood lately. I really like the minimal production. Leave it nice, simple and clean. I like it!

lovely, feels genuine!
 

It's a very powerful song Tim. As I first began to listen I thought it was a little too simply produced and needed something extra, but by about the 30sec mark I was right there with you. By the end I was standing applauding. Some songs are just meant to come through, there are many stories of musicians being given a song while they're asleep, a testimony to you to have given it just the right words.

Nice one Tim.

Lynn- Thanks for listening. I aoppreciate your comments as always.
 
olemon- Thanks for listening. I guess this is how a guy with emotion and a mediocre voice sounds lol.
 
spacealf- A little more compression- got it. Thanks!
 
clint- I do minimal  better than complicated I think . Appreciate the listen. Killer album you made BTW.
 
twisted6s- Thanks!
 
rebel007- Yes I don't often get an idea like that after I wake.People waving goodbye to other people. Not like going to work but like going for good. Thanks for listening.
 
timidi- Thanks. Please tell me if something sucks. I know you have a good ear.
 
 

Hey Tim. Nice song. I like the lyrics. Wow your muse is in attendance even while your sleeping. The merging of the setting sun with the sudden exit speaks volumes. I liked too that "the touch of your hand and the look in your eye" implies that it might have been just as difficult for the one gone to find the right words. Like your "It's hard to say goodbye    I can't even try". Anyway, I liked it so thanks for sharing it.   Jim