Lots of nice sounds there Walt. I think the middle section is way to long for this piece, unless, of course, you plan on adding some other instrumentation in the middle, like some awesome guitar work, bass and lead, then it would work better for me, but, it's not about me because it is your piece. It all sounds great and a nice mix, but as is the middle could be cut back some so the over all length of the piece is about 2:30 long. Just my opinion. Great work as usual.
Peace and Blessings, John