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2014/01/24 19:22:34
drma173
https://soundcloud.com/tony_jay/s-guelo
BPM140 fast pace song with long singing. hope ya enjoy
2014/01/24 20:40:16
Lynn
Take a bow, mi amigo, you have broken through to another level.  This is the most polished, radio-ready song you have posted to date.  Having followed you for a while, I'm impressed.  I'll be looking to you for answers, now.  Thanks for making my day :)
2014/01/25 12:06:50
Rimshot
Love your vocal sound.  Highs and lows on the track are really good.  Nicely not over-compressed.  I would like more snare or crack on 2 & 4.  On Down and Dirty, maybe kill the reverb and go DRY for contrast.  At around 2:40 the lead vocal seems to come up in volume compared to the earlier parts.  
 
Good job.
2014/01/25 12:50:12
speedtom
I agree on Lynn, you have made huge improvements since I am around here...that said, I have noticed some timing issues with the vocals, if you work of them radio is waiting for you!
2014/01/27 23:19:38
theguitarplayer
Top notch  sound and mix. Great vocals Jay! You have come a long way since you first started posting. Soon you will have your own club with lots of people hopping around! Great sound and vibe.
 
Peace and Blessings, John
2014/01/28 07:13:27
rebel007
Great work, first I heard you. Really pumping. Lots of things happening, I can tell you put a lot of work into this and it has really paid off.
2014/02/02 23:02:34
Voda La Void
Sounds cool to me man.  I don't normally listen to this kind of music, but my wife makes me listen to this genre when I'm in *her* car, so I'm getting more used to it and this sounds up to par with everything I've heard on the radio.  I'm writing this as I'm listening, and I find I like how the bass and drums stop and you go into some trippy stuff and then it starts pumping again with that dancing synth thingy on top...down..down..dirty..dirty..
 
Yeah pretty cool and professional.. Nice job. 
2014/02/03 03:26:19
whack
Mate, I think I remember that last time you posted something on this forum, with this track you have improved times 10!
 
I do listen to this kind of music and I will say this production is at the top level of this genre on the radio.
 
Your vocals have come on a lot and I love the change up of percussion and beats throughout which keep interest.
 
For me this is 95% to be fully radio ready.
 
(1) Too long, take a minute off it.
 
(2) I want to hear more of the main hook in the song which is from 4:02 until the end.
 
(3) Vocals, which are awesome all around, have a few out of tune spots which give it away.
 
(4) and just to be anal about it, the intro is to abrupt coming in IMO.
 
Well done sir, this is really good :-)
 
Cian
2014/02/03 13:28:28
Wookiee
Agree with the others this is definitely a big step up from your previous showings.
 
Thanks for sharing.
2014/03/01 09:50:27
olemon
This is fantastic.  I dig it from start to finish.  With the advice given you by these experts, you ought to have a hit on your hands:)
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