Would it upset you if I said can I have a bit more kick?
 
Thanks for sharing and on mix 4

Wookiee
Would it upset you if I said can I have a bit more kick?
 
Thanks for sharing and on mix 4

Not at all, Wookie.  Give me a few minutes.
 
Ahh...here it is, mix 5: http://www.soundclick.com...ngid=12649391&q=hi
 

I love this!!  I love the bass line.  And the marimba/xylophone thing is awesome.  Wow, this is really pro.  Nice stuff!!

Hey Lynn,

I listen to this one the last couple of nights while I walk the big yellow dog. I may have commented last time you posted this one, but for me it has a real Joe Walsh feel to it. I like it a lot, lots of stuff going on, fun song. I can't say much about the mix, at least nothing you'd want to go by from an iPhone. I like the bass riff and the tone of the guitar tracks they sound great. Overall this is one of my favorites that you have recorded.

Thank goodness for voice recognition texting, I can actually, comment while on the walk with the big yellow dog.

@ ralphwiggum-Don, I appreciate your kind words and time!
 
@ MakeShift-Mike, thanks so much for your input.  My new tablet has now become part of my mixing platform, which means I'm mixing for smaller and smaller speakers all the time.  It's tricky!

Lynn sorry for the delay in replying following my request I had to go do evening meal.
 
Much better big

Wookie, thanks for staying with this.  You are so right!  I took this for a spin in my car, yesterday, and I immediately realized that the sound filled up the area better than ever before.  It makes me wonder how I missed that before, but that's why I come here for help.  Thanks to all!

Really Cool Tune Lynn, It comes over a little distorted on my set-up but that may have been intended as a little dirty mix.

Hi Alan, it was not meant to be distorted, and does not come across that way on my system.  I do master my songs to be approximately as loud as commercial releases but keep the headroom at -3.5 db with light limiting.  I appreciate you taking the time to comment and bringing this to my attention.  I love your vocal covers.

Great song Lynn.  It's a wild ride, and will make a super end to your compilation.
 
I want to mention that I think the bass guitar is perhaps a bit TOO prominent in the mid frequencies (sounds kinda "nasal" to me).  A lot of the bass riffs sound like low pitched guitar leads and not BASS.  IMHO you might want to consider separating the bass and guitar frequency ranges from each other a bit more so they don't compete as much.