Excellent guitars as noted elsewhere.  Top notch sound.  The jangling bit probably needs to duck a notch or two more during the vocals so the vocals float above them.
 
And I would try a few things on those vocals - maybe a light delay.  They sound good but could be a bit more up front.  More reverb would probably push them farther back, hense the delay.  but I could be all wrong.
 
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Everything that needs to be said has been said so i will say no more.
 
Thanks for sharing.

jameyoyo -  Thanks man, I really like the guitar I recorded this with, but it has a lot of problems with it. I'm hoping to upgrade sometime in the near future. Thanks for listening and replying. 
 
Guitarhacker - Thank you for taking the time to listen and reply. I'm hoping I can correct a lot of things on the next version, if all goes as planned I will have a singer who doesn't need voice correction, at least too much that is. I like trying to sing but I have too many problems just trying to speak sometimes, I have a lot of problems with my voice just talking sometimes. Thanks again. 
 
 Waltenstein Studios - Thank you for taking the time to listen and reply, Your 100% right on with what you are saying. I have a lot of problems just speaking sometimes. I rush things and do too many one takes on recording. I hope my next version of this song will be more polished and better performed, I plan on taking more time with it and hopefully getting things better mixed. I'm no mix master that's for sure. Thanks again for taking the time to listen and reply. 
 
The Night Fox - Thanks for taking the time James, Hey I hope you and your family have a safe trip going all the way from the west coast to the east, Man I know that is something I wouldn't want to do. Have a safe trip my friend, take a rest at the rest stops if you get tired. Thanks again for taking the time to listen and reply. 
 
Freddy J - Thanks Freddy J, Now that I listen to the song after a few months after recording this I know you are right on with everything you are saying my friend. I tend to rush things a lot of times, not just with music but obviously with vocals also. Thanks again, I am taking notes and hope the next version I post of this song will be better. Thanks again. 
 
AT - Thank you, I'm hoping to get someone to sing this song for me on the next version. Actually a GIRL to sing it, I have re-written the words. We shall see how this works out, it might be a few months, but I don't wanna rush anything anymore. In the past I was just so excited to be recording that I would post anything and everything, I overdone that. Hopefully the next version will be much better. Thank you for taking the time to listen and reply. 
 
Wookiee - Thank you for taking the time to listen and reply I wanna take a lot more time on the next version of this and hopefully have a real singer sing it for me, thanks again. 
 
 
 

I wanted to ask everyone how the bass might sound better on this? Should I adjust the sound to be brighter or re-record it, I know it's not perfect, it's kinda a lose sound so I left it. It has a natural  sound to it, is natural sounding always the best? I'm fixing to start re-working on this song, lyrics have been re-written which I think are better word choices. My personal choices for a lot of things are always raw sounding, I'm no mix master that's for sure. I would like to try and do something special with this song though. Any advice is welcomed. Thank you all for taking the time!!
 
Sorry I haven't been on here in a while, I have been so busy it's ridiculous.
I do wanna take the time to say HAPPY HOLIDAYS to all!!
 
Bobby

Bobby,
 
I just started posting again on this forum after being away for 2 or 3 years.  Man, you have gotten a lot better!!!  I like this song a lot.  So singing isn't your strong point. So what?  The song itself is very good and well written.  And all the parts; drums, guitars, bass, etc. are all well executed and nicely recorded and mixed.  I think if a really great singer took a shot at this song it would be excellent indeed.  I struggle with singing and songwriting a lot myself.  I'm 46 years old and I'm just starting to feel more comfortable with my singing.  It's really interesting to come back to the forum after a long absence and see just how much better people have gotten at their craft.  You've really improved a lot!!!
 
Peace,
Don 

Good tune, Bobby.  I like this style of music, and you can bring it home.  Let's hear more!

Thanks Don,  Thanks for listening!! Sorry for the slow reply.
 
Lynn , Dude, thank you so much for the compliment. Time will tell where this tune goes. Thanks!!

Everyone is critical about their own vocals, turn them up I want to hear them. That might just make everything else sit better as well. Good song. Did I mention that it's a GOOD SONG.

I liked it, and especially the guitar work as others have said.  This is a good song.  Just keep working on the mix.  I'm a newb, but I'd leave the guitars alone, then mix your vocals to sit well, and then balance the mix around that core. 

Nice song bro......WTF is going on with you man????