Thanks for taking the time to listen and reply everyone. Sorry I haven't been on here for a while, I have been busy with other things. I'm hoping to re-record this song with someone who can sing that I have been talking to in the near future, I have to get a few things in order first before doing so. I decided to go back to the original words that I wrote this song about, I think they fit better, the words in this version are not the original ones.
Thanks again everyone!