Hi All, you've heard the beginnings of this, so you might as well hear the finished article.  Well maybe not quite finished but good enough for now.
  
Rik

Interesting little dirge, if I might observe it come across slightly left channel heavy here and the bass/drum gets a little wareing, but that a furry eared thing.
 
Thanks for sharing
 
I liked the other tune the test one Thr5a.

Hi John, fair comments, changed things a bit, maybe better. Anyway , I learned a new word , "dirge", had to look that one up : )
 
Rik
 
 

Yes, interesting little funeral piece. I recently finished one myself called Requiem Of Grace on my site below. I liked the choir parts, as the were put together nicely. The drums in the beginning gave me almost a sense of a funeral march was what you were shooting for, but maybe not. Anyway, not bad at all. Thanks for sharing.
 
Peace and Blessings, John

Hi John the guitarplayer, thanks for listening. Drums were an afterthought and a funeral march was the intention ; )
 
Rik

Ok, I really like the chord structure..especially after the first minute and half..going into that second half.  But it sounds like the foundation, unfinished.  I'm hearing that Muse telephone keypad like arpeggio filling out the upper spectrum, or something interesting underneath.  I don't know, but it doesn't come across as complete - just my two cents as a listener. 
 
Cool chords that hang on an extra second before they change notes, keeping the progression-prediction just out of reach..I like that.   I just wish it had filled up the frequency range a bit more with other stuff - same chords maybe even, just something else.  And no, I'm not a millenial, ha ha. 

Hi voda , thanks for listening, glad you like the chords. Wish I was able to play some guitar over this.
 
Rik

New mix 9-2, last one ; ) Promise.
 
Rik
 
 

This would work under a video with a brooding feel, darkness and foreboding.
 
Nice I like it.

Hi John ,thanks, took your advice, it works ;)
 
Rik